miss white, immediately, gave a quiz on the weekend homework steve hurried through the test, and was the first to hand in his paper with a look of surprise, miss white took his paper obusly puzzled, she began to look it over steve walked back to his desk, his heart pounding within his chest as he sat down, he couldn’t resist another look at the lovely woman
miss white’s face was in total shock! she glanced up at steve, then down, then up suddenly, her face broke into a radiant smile the smartest boy in the seventh grade had just passed his first test!
from that moment nothing was the same for steve life at home remained the same, but life still changed he discovered that not only could he learn, but he was good at it!
he discovered that he could understand and retain knowledge, and that he could translate the things he learned into his own life steve began to excel! and he continued this course throughout his school life
after high-school steve enlisted in the navy, and he had a suessful military career during that time, he met the love of his life, he raised a family, and he graduated from college magna cum laude during his naval career, he inspired many young people, who without him, might not have believed in themselves steve began a second career after the navy, and he continues to inspire others, as an adjunct professor(副教授) in a nearby college。
miss white left a great legacy she saved one boy who has changed many lives i know, because i am the love of his life
you see, it’s simple, really a change took place within the heart of one boy, all because of one teacher, who cared
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读后续写,阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
one weekend in july, jane and her husband, tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel by the time they reached the lake, jane was so angry that she said to tom, “i’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away
with no path to follow, jane just walked on for quite a long time after she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake to her surprise, she saw nothing but fore stand, far beyond, a snowced mountain top she suddenly realized that she was lost
“tom!” she cried “help!”
no reply if only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with tom jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became as night was beginning to fall, jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night lying awake in the dark, jane wanted very much to be with tom and her family she wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him
jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty she could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance quickly she followed the sound to a stream to her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes she drank and ate a few berries never in her life had she tasted anything better feeling stronger now, jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake
as she picked her way carefully along the stream, jane heard a helicopter is that for me unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above a few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again
注意:
1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
paragraph1:
but no more helicopter came and it wasgetting dark again____________
paragraph2:
it was daybreak when jane woke up _________________________
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人设修改处:
女主角jane在原作里是一个已婚女子,改为未婚夫是tom的少女。
不对开头和结局做修改。
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血红色的夕阳将要沉至连绵不断的山脉下了,晚归的倦鸟排着队掠过披着霞光的天。林地上,积累了一个白昼的余热渐渐消散,能感受到森林里在夜晚出没的危险正在躁动不安。
加奈坐在森林深处一个高地的一块被蒸得发烫的石块上,心随着夕阳一同下沉。因近十分钟连续不断呼喊救命而干渴不已的喉咙开始火辣辣地作痛。
这是一个七月的周末,刚刚毕业的高中生加奈和空降的海归未婚夫tom被双方家长所迫开车前往z市边界的一片森林露营。加奈和tom相识过程不到一个星期,期间两人的对话九成是由单音节词“啊”“嗯”“哦”“呃”组成的,不用提培养出了什么感情了,加奈在这个星期中对tom积累的好感度甚至不如自己房间里新安装的空调来得高。扯淡的婚约完全是父母之命,媒妁之言。
她还记得订婚的当天晚上,两家长辈齐聚一堂,她大舅的二姨的侄子的表妹的三叔的弟弟的外甥女主持仪式,当场郑重地宣布了她必须和tom订婚的原因。
理由竟然是……
场景一:
爸爸流着泪拉着加奈的手,妈妈边给他擦泪边自己哭得泪流满面:“加奈啊,不是爸爸妈妈舍得你,可是爸爸的公司真的资金流转不通,要不是tom家伸出援手,我们一定会破产的……tom虽然是个霸道总裁,但人长得帅年纪也和你差不了多少,你嫁过去之后要孝顺公婆,相夫教子,别忘了常回家看看……”
tom坐在纯金打造的座椅上,一只手抵住下巴,邪魅一笑:“女人,你引起了我的注意……”
震惊!一男子因生意受阻竟将独生女儿卖给霸道总裁当老婆!
场景二:
爸爸拉着加奈和tom的手:“加奈啊,我和tom的爸爸年轻时义结金兰,同生共死,有过命的交情。当年我们各自娶妻,他老婆先生了个儿子,当你妈妈怀孕的时候,我们相约如果生出来是女儿,就让你们长大后结婚,如果生出来的是儿子,就让你们长大后去外国结婚……”
妈妈不舍道:“加奈,妈妈帮你看过了,tom是个遵纪守法积极向上多才多艺知识渊博的好少年,虽然你们现在没有什么感情,但可以先订婚再培养嘛,虽然妈妈也很舍不得你,但女大不中留啊,嫁过去后你要孝顺公婆,相夫教子,别忘了常回家看看……”
加奈:“……”
以上是脑洞少女加奈的臆想。
然而真相往往比想象更出乎意料。
“今天能在这里见证你们的订婚仪式,我倍感荣幸。”外甥女一只手拉着加奈,另一只手拉着tom,因兴奋而两颊飞红,“在场的诸位前辈,诸位少年精英,我们即将看到古武世家最强联姻的诞生。他们将生下两千年来武道的最强者,也就是圣子!”
说完这段话,在众人赞许的目光中,她亲切地祝愿:“希望两位早生贵子。”
……
“为什么我完全不知道自己的家庭背景?”加奈看着窗外,自言自语道。
无意中听见这句话的tom嗤笑一声,斜睨了她一眼:“因为丝毫没有武道天赋,所以连自己出身的真相都没有资格了解。除了被当做生育圣子的机器之外,还有别的出路吗?”
加奈气红了脸:“祝你头顶大草原,武道天才。”
tom:“……”
汽车缓缓停在路边。一秒钟之后,加奈被踢出车厢。
这就是加奈和tom起争执,加奈气愤出走的起因和经过。
一旦入夜,森林会变得十分危险。深知着这一点的加奈用尽最后一点力气爬上了一块林中高地。相比森林深处,这里更为安全,而且更有机会获得救援。她静坐了很久,顺着自己能听见的远处的水声找到了长在溪流边的一些浆果,勉强充饥后尽快回到高地上。
太阳快要完全沉入群峰之下时,一阵直升机的轰鸣声自远而近传来。这对加奈来说无疑是个天大的好消息。她脱下身上明黄色的防晒衣,向飞来的直升机挥舞:“喂——”
然而出乎意料的事情发生了。
不知何时出现在天空中的,比直升机大上好几倍的不明飞行物突然向直升机发起攻击。毫无招架之力的直升机在吃了一记火球之后,化为了天空中的一道流星,“咻”地坠落下去。整个过程甚至不到五秒。
加奈:“……”
那个击落直升机的是什么鬼东西?
不明飞行物仰起头,发出长长的、尖锐的呖叫。它这时离加奈已经很近,就在她头顶上空盘旋不止,似乎要降落在她身旁。狮子的躯体和鹰的翅膀与头部,阳光般的羽毛金光闪闪,巨大的绿色爪子和有力的尾巴——这些无不说明,那是一只只出现在欧风传说中的动物。
狮鹫。
就在加奈一骨碌爬起身,将要跑到隐蔽之处躲藏时,从狮鹫背上探出一个人头:“别怕——我们来救你了——”
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倏忽间,庞然大物已经从天而降,整个地面为之震颤,加奈也躲闪不及,被狮鹫收回翅膀时掀起的飓风掀翻在地。
从狮鹫上一前一后跳下两个人来,从她们的服饰来看,应该是欧风古典侍卫一类的人物。两人都是十六七岁的少女,带有佩剑,上身象征性地披挂铠甲。前面那个头发为金黄色,梳着两个高高的大波浪马尾,一落地就迅速向加奈跑过来:“你没事吧?”
加奈被她搀扶起来,站稳后脚踝传来隐隐的刺痛。但她不想在陌生人面前将其表现出来,于是没有开口,只是摇了摇头示意。此时后面那人也走了上来,一头银色短发、面无表情的脸和沉默的气场显示了两人是一对属性互补的搭档。
金发双马尾少女自我介绍:“我叫子寒,她叫子建,我们是公国的宫廷侍卫。刚才我们的狮鹫击落了想要对你不利的不明飞行物。”说到这里,她扬了扬头,一副等待加奈感谢的样子。
加奈一脸冷漠:“哦。”如果不是她横插一脚的话,自己也许早就乘直升机获救了吧。对了……直升机!
子寒嘟起嘴:“你怎么一点都没有感恩之心?皇后教导公国的每一个子民,人活在世上一定要学会感恩……”
“刚刚那架飞机上的人怎么样了?发生坠机事故的话,会不会造成死伤?”
子寒对皇后的谆谆教导被加奈打断表示不满:“在我背诵皇后经典语录的时候不要随便插嘴……啊疼!子建你干什么?”
子建伸出握成拳的手,打开,掌心里放着一块银白色石盘,上面有几个光点正在闪闪发亮。